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In addition to setting, another story element which Crew masterfully crafts is character. Sarah is a true heroine with which young girls aged 8-14 will generally relate. She is hardworking, loyal, loving clever and strong. All of these character traits serve her well in her fight to save her family from their cruel and lethal mother. The introduction of Will, a bright young boy who is the sole friend of Sarah's, adds intrigue to the plot as he ultimately saves Sarah and her siblings from the hands of Mama.
Despite the tone of this novel having an unpromising beginning, as the plot progresses the feeling of oppression turns to one of hopefulness. In the scene where Will shows up at Sarah's door with his mother, a social worker, and a police officer the book suddenly takes on a promising energy. Although the children's misery is finally coming to an end, Crew does not produce a trite finish. At the trail where Sarah testifies against Mama for the murder of countless children in her care, our heroine is at odds with herself. Despite holding a strong hate for the mother who caused her such hardship, she still feels a loyalty towards the woman who gave her a home for nine years. Crew's characters are not black and white. Sarah's fidelity towards Mama parallels a more likely reaction if the character was based on reality.
Having been sufficiently intrigued by this novel I was compelled to do some research. To my surprise I discovered that this story is based on truth. Crew took the lives of three women convicted of purchasing babies and then murdering them and created one character: Mama. This novel for me was not only an enthralling read but also taught me about a slice of history I did not know existed. In my opinion, the little-known events that are documented in this book bring light to a subject that should be familiar and not forgotten within the pages of the past.
Evidently, this is a difficult subject to broach in a novel meant for children, however Crew does so in a way that is both appropriate and realistic. Mama's Babies is a book I will add to my growing collection and cherish as a favorite.
Homeless BirdBy Gloria Whelan
Genre: Contemporary realistic fiction
Although Homeless Bird by Gloria Whelan is a National Book Award Winner, I found myself to be unsatisfied when I turned the last page. For the purpose of this journal I will focus on setting, characters and plot and I will admit that the first of these elements is constructed quite well. This story takes place in modern-day India, first in a rural village and later in a large city. It follows the struggles on young Koly who has been forced into an arranged marriage at the age of 13. Whelan describes the settings in this novel so well that I truly felt as though I was there. It provided me with vivid images of rural and urban India and helped to validate the storyline and characters. For example, when Whelan first describes the city of Varanasi she is intricate in her details: "In this city of fifteen thousand shrines, each shrine was more splendid than the next, but he was pointing to the great mosque of Aurangzeb, where the city's Muslims worshiped. Its eight towers were like lanterns suspended from the sky." As a reader, I appreciated the details the author has woven into the story as I have never visited India and probably never will. She also does this in such a way that one is not burdened with excessive information and becomes bored.In addition to the setting, Whelan crafts the well-developed main character, Koly. The readers get to experience the difficult Indian life as a woman first-hand and I think Koly is a true representation of this lifestyle. The entire novel is told from her point of view. This is helpful on one hand as we get to live through her struggles, however it is only Koly's character than has any real development. The additional characters seem stereotypical of many stories: the disapproving mother-in-law, the sometimes caring but often dismissive father-in-law, and the male romantic interest who ultimately sweeps Koly off her feet and saves her from a life of misery. I'm not implying that these people are a detriment to the story, however it would be interesting to see their further development. That being said I understand that this is a novel meant for children and this somewhat limits the length of the book and amount of detail Whelan can include.
My main concern with this novel is the plot. First of all the book develops very slowly and although I personally did not lose interest I did find myself noticing the gradual plot development. It is not until around the 100th page of this 182 page book that real conflict begins. Up until this point, Whelan is simply describing Koly's difficult life with her in-laws. Although this provides the reader with an intimate look into the life of a young woman, the amount of description can be cumbersome and monotonous at times. My second point of contention is with Koly's life choices. She has gone from a timid, uneducated, powerless wife to an independent, learned, and working woman. It is difficult not to feel a sense of pride and accomplishment for Koly who has beaten to odds and removed herself from the typical oppressed life of a young Indian girl. However, this sense of satisfaction for Koly is somewhat deflated when she is asked to marry Raji, her love interest. This means she will have to give up her job and independence in the city and move to the country with him. At first she is hesitant but her apprehension quickly turns to duty towards the man she loves: "At first it was exciting to have a room of our own , but I soon tired of it...my last doubts about the marriage flew from me like a flock of birds starting up from a field to be lost in the distance." Whelan too quickly gives Koly a life of independence then snatches it away. The life she has tried so hard to avoid ends up being the life she chooses for herself. And although Raji is a loving husband, I felt as though Koly was cheated out of something. Try as I might I could not come away from this book without a sense of uneasiness. Is this the message Whelan is trying to convey to her readers? That marriage and duty to family trump self-reliance and liberation? I am not entirely convinced that this is an appropriate theme to relay to young, impressionable readers.
Nonetheless this was an interesting read. I felt I learned quite a lot about Indian culture and the oppression of women which still exists today. For the reasons explained above this is not a book I would include on my top 10 list. I believe that there are better books out there which do not emphasize fairy-tale endings as a means to happiness.
A Brief Comparison of the Two Novels: Mama's Babies & Homeless Bird
Similarities:
- Revolve around the struggle of a young girl to escape her horrible home environment
- Based on true events or plausible situations
- Deplorable mother or mother-in-law
- Male friend who helps the girls deal with their situations
- Well-developed main characters
- Well-developed settings
Differences:
- Different time periods
- Different countries
- Homeless Bird takes much longer to get to the crux of the conflict
- Mama's Babies highlights a theme of perseverance and strength and while Homeless Bird appears to do so the novel ends with the main character choosing traditional marriage over independence
My pick is definitely Mama's Babies by Gary Crew. It has all the characteristics of a good quality children's novel while teaching about a piece of history that is little-known.
